We are learning to...
· write a personal recount about something we have done or experienced
· have an opening statement that tells who, what and where
· write the events in the order they happened
· have a conclusion or personal response
I went to the playground. I played on the flying fox. I felt happy and it looked like a zip line.
You have 3 good sentences Jayden.
Try to write more details. Where was the playground? What colour was the flying fox?