T1 Writing

We are learning to...

·      write a personal recount about something we have done or experienced

Criteria:

·      have an opening statement that tells who, what and where

·      write the events in the order they happened

·      have a conclusion or personal response

The Playground

I went to the playground. I played on the flying fox. I felt happy and it looked like a zip line.

Teacher comment:

You have 3 good sentences Jayden.

Next step:

Try to write more details. Where was the playground? What colour was the flying fox?